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5/14/2013 4:48:16 PM
Teresa Lindsay Posts: 16
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Lying back on the green grass of spring Watching the late afternoon sun set The sky ablaze with bright reds and oranges Breeze softly whispering in my ear Fireflys lighting the early evening Tree frogs craoking, crickets chirping Birds singing their last songs Hearing the creek gentlely moving Day fading into the night stars appear Twinking far above my head, brightly Moon sloftly glowing, showing me it's face What a way to end the day, not a worry in mind.
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