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2/1/2013 2:27:02 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Moments I feel weak I work and work Feel so busy it's hard to speak Everywhere I turn Feels like a block I've got to do, no time for talk But at the end of the day There's an ache in my chest There's so much time I was to invest In better causes but this is where I'mleft Broke down by some stooge dressed in anStructure vest I want to beat you so bad, I'll find away I don't give up that easy, just wont betoday There's room in this world for honestbusiness It's what my grandpa believed in, That honorable feeling never goes outof season
I'll wake up one day Walls will shatter like glass I'll get up and everything will be ingrasp I'll have good workers that get paidwell Mothers can allow their kids out oftheir shell They can raise them at home instead ofa daycare Way better than the present whichsometimes is more than I can bear.
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