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11/24/2012 4:26:20 PM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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In the shower I start to cry Tears of joy, All the sad ones have dried
Feels amazing to feel loose ends sewingtogether Imagine in a few years, my blanket willbe jammed pack Unattainable dreams I had as a child Will actually come true, just seems toowild
You work hard and harder and evenharder Eventually it pays off The fresh oxygen seems surreal When you do it for love or purpose All the work seems like no big deal
Hard work makes for clearer mirrors, The lines and wrinkles show proof yourhonest and sincere No need for makeup, just take care ofyourself Positivity is a magnet, a powerstronger than you will provide stampedes of help
Most millionaires don't appear by somelucky lad rubbing a bottle Took one man, or two men Or one idea that took hours of work anddedication to iron out Those who call it overnight success They just benefit from others work, butare too lazy to put forth their best
The fire of “I can and will”outlives the sparks of “one day” When progress is made, makes that firegrow stronger and willful Doesn't matter what anyone else wantsyou to do or say. They can complain, they can save money,they can do whatever they want It gets harder to empathize for themwhen lazy ways start to taunt.
In a world where many judgesignificance by your employer You dare start something new, they'reyour new destroyer Some will pick you apart or turn theirheads which can make you blue But your doing something they'd neverdo, making your dreams true edited by svlynn18 on 11/24/2012
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