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11/20/2012 5:06:54 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Im broke,broke, broke They make it look like one big joke Feels like sit and go traffic Where's the job lane, I need a paycheck
I may not have a factory certifiedHummer Or the Escalade with the fat wheels andthe “Honor Roll Student On Board”bumper sticker But I got skills and I could use somedinner
Delivering food to a table isn't rocketscience If you ask me one more time what I'dbring to the table When you give me this spectacularcashier job, I may take a few twenties once thealarm is disabled.
One thing you wont learn from a paper You'd better treat people nice Karma will bite, You'll be buying your clothes from thePenny Saver
Women are caddy and compared to men weget paid less Lie all you want, but we're not betterthan men, Obviously not thinking with our minds, Still thinking with our chests.
If you've got a job, That's awesome, good for you But don't tell me I'm not trying, I don't wanna see that look or hear theattitude
I understand the need to cover bills But it doesn't make sense to spendfifty hours a week For someone who sees you work hard,doesn't offer a raise, Then laughs with a huge thrill
I'd rather be broke broke broke \Maybe I've got too much pride But It's no joke.
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