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11/16/2012 11:02:51 PM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Staring at this screen My thoughts are a race car in the indie500 Highly combustible and fast When I blink, they seem to wipe clean
I try to stare again, All I hear is this woman “Waa WaaaWa Waaa” She'd be the perfect person for thePeanuts Christmas Chex Mix commercials
I look down at the packet I was handed Shows a picture of the new phone out, Diagram shows where the controls are And how to troubleshoot issues Man..What I would give.. TO reach through the speaker of my headset Flick her in the nose, and force her to read her manual But I would fail Quality Assurance if I did that So I'll just sit here and be grateful I have a job. edited by svlynn18 on 11/16/2012
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