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10/20/2012 3:38:55 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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That bottle of booze might be old news But it never kept you from me
Your addiction switched from alcohol toher She's tricked you to think I'm an evillittle girl
Possessed with her looks and mind You had no problem leaving my existencebehind
Too much for you, shutting the doorseemed like the easiest choice I hope every day for the the rest ofyour life you hear this child's voice
How does it feel to know you're notthere When you look at her, Does she have enough happiness to share I can't imagine yours is real So she'd have to have more than enoughto steal For you to get by and fake Your okay with your choices and yourfate
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