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10/16/2012 4:07:51 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Sitting in front of you Cameras dazing right at me Sometimes this seems more like afantasy Than a brutal reality
Many think we haven't grown What could I say for them to believe There's the option of repeating the same crap It'd be historical if there wasaltering idea I conceived
They wouldn't like it I'd get all sorts of resistance They don't like changes Nothing from everyday life that's not consistent
So when I open my mouth, And talk to the light I'll ask the people of this world If bipolar nations can establish a pathfor a future that's right edited by svlynn18 on 10/16/2012
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