Poetry Forum
For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
9/6/2012 3:19:21 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
|
It's 8 in the morning, I've got a play date with my bike, Love to go down the hill so fast, Doing tricks, I sure do dig this ride, Arms off the handle, wind in my face, I satisfy life's moments with funembrace, Friends and I are playing bus driver, The bike just let off 4 passengers atthe stop, Now it goes much faster, Gotta pick a few more up, If a car comes, in seconds, my obstaclecourse would be a disaster. All clear, the competition starts “You waddle like a duck when youpeddle uphill” “Whatever, jerk, don't tease me, I'ma girl” “Come on, chickenbutt” “Shut up, monkeylover” He beat me, but that's ok, I'll beat him on this next trick, I just never want that clock to tick.
|
• permalink
• reply with quote
|
Powered by AspNetForum
6.6.0.0
© 2006-2010 Jitbit Software