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8/1/2012 8:50:54 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Not Fair
When I Think it's done,
My emotions become undone,
I cried for hours for you,
You always fail to come through,
Not fair, I cry and cry
My love will never die,
Been 6 years for me.
You live 10 min from me,
Never bother to call,
Apologize for sorrow you installed,
Not fair, I cry and cry,
My love for you will never die,
Your the ass I cant shake,
Thought I'd get over you,
Huge mistake,
With every milestone.
Every happy moment,
there's a part of me,
your love would be my happy token
Not fair,I cry and cry,
My love for you will never die
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8/4/2012 12:40:24 AM
femi joey oloidi Posts: 13
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Nice and touching! I like, "your the ass,I can't shake" cool! Lol Kingfemi.
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