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7/28/2012 10:27:45 PM
Luis Martinez-Rivera Posts: 5
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Nothingness- pure, vibrant, black-and-white.
Oh- the brightest you say?
Oh- elegant you believe?
Have you ever, wished upon a star?
Constellations, the true color, of canvas, that is the sky!
A dark sea, black-and-white twinkle, light and bright.
Black- White- Oh!
Orion's belt....
A little to the left.
A little to the right.
True color, in black-and-white.
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