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When Silence Speaks

How can they say
silence has no sound? Make it go away.
Floor-felled, right ear pressed to the phone,
cowering in a quarry of quiet
between coffee table and couch.

Yes, I tell her, yes I can hear.

Fingers in ears, fingers laced across face
in a filigree fretwork of fear.
Overwhelm washes over in waves,
water whooshing into the ears of shells.
Shells like ears or ears like shells...

Muggy heat-thrum of July and August sounds
exploding like pollen grains between ear and brain.
And what should be silence but isn't
hangs like a pall, enwraps like a caul, hissing
wires snake from the wall...

What do the noises sound like?

Snakes writhing and rearing to strike.

We could try you on Quetiapine, she says.

Silence has a sound. I know it speaks.
I know the scream of silent weeks.

Copyright © Charlotte Puddifoot | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 5/14/2024 3:28:00 AM

I always like your poems, they make me think. How ironic that the medicine nearly has the word 'quiet'. Fear and silence are not good companions and it makes sense that the internal soundscape builds from thrums and hisses to screams. - with the ambiguity of which is driving which (fear and sounds). Alliteration is often pretty but here it has an eerie crescendo with that rhyming sequence pall caul wall. Do I escape, or turn and scream back?
Date: 5/13/2024 5:17:00 PM

Amazing work! You have an innate ability to stay the with the rhythm of the thought, jumping from wave to wave, with each wave it's own sonorous message, easy-gliding while perfectly worded. A very deserved first place. Keep up your excellent work!
Date: 5/13/2024 2:48:00 PM

Interesting winner. Congratulations. Sara K
Date: 5/13/2024 5:04:00 AM

Nice win Charlotte!
Date: 5/12/2024 5:56:00 AM

The perfect winner of this contest. The chronic silence of near madness between the ears...hmm.
Date: 5/12/2024 4:01:00 AM

Is this about my perforated eardrum, which is driving me nuts. Noise drives us nuts, but silence can send you insane. Need to google Quetiapine now. Better be something to do with alcohol.
Date: 5/10/2024 10:09:00 PM

Another superb write Charlotte. Wonderfully structured with great use of alliteration. Your words drew me in and held me there. Society judges on face value. Much of 'the iceberg' of suffering goes unseen and misunderstood. I'm familiar with Quetiapine from my time as a nurse. I'm going to raise a glass to your great poetic skills and read it once more to my forever tinnitus. Cheers - Gary
Date: 5/10/2024 5:12:00 AM

I saw from a comment below that you may suffer from bipolar disease? My close relative does too and if so I can empathize. I know you've had it rough but you're an awesome poet Charlotte
Date: 5/9/2024 12:48:00 PM

Such a great gift you have- this was raw, yes, but it shines
Date: 5/9/2024 10:14:00 AM

What do the noises sound like? Snakes writhing and rearing to strike...wow! Great, as always, dear Charlotte! xx Kim
Date: 5/8/2024 6:09:00 PM

wow, I know the scream of silent weeks, you couldn't have tied it better together than this, a perfect little poem worth its gold, :)
Date: 5/8/2024 3:14:00 PM

I love the quiet intensity of this poem, Charlotte. Great last line. Kudos on a great write. Regards, John
Date: 5/8/2024 1:20:00 PM

Dear charlotte, what a brilliant take this is. Youve delivered a deeply moving write that i resonate with as i see this closely. I found it very interesting that you mentioned quetiapine. A drug used sometimes also for individuals that suffer from bipolar disorder. I also love the wordplay especially “hangs like a pall, enwraps like a caul, hissing wires snake from the wall... What do the noises sound like?” As well as your flawless alliterations. Brilliant take on this prompt. Loved the prompt and also your take on it. Definitely a top win. Best wishes dear charlotte: sending you light always
Date: 5/8/2024 12:25:00 PM

This contest filled up so quick... I think mental illness is something that is not seen by everyone and sadly, some people completely ignore it... Your poem touches upon the emotions someone could be suffering and you did it in a clever way.. All the best in the contest..
Date: 5/8/2024 12:10:00 PM

You make it all look so easy Charlotte

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