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My Irish Rose

No thorn could prick, my dying eyes to rest Below heavens window, God's borrowed guest, Or fulfil my heart where love had sadly failed. Like crusading knights who sought the grail. Sweet velvet petals that bridges hearts, Where beauty spreads and heaven parts, From unknown wings where time has flown, Dreams rested whilst your beauty shown. Dispersed to rest in Nature's treasured womb, To enrich our flagging spirits beyond the tomb, When life's lost souls will take my earthly place, To breathe beauty with love and healing grace. When each petal wilts and life in earnest starts, And memories pinched as winter plays her part, I will adore you in dreams of unmatched smiles, My Irish rose, beauty, that stole my straying eyes.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2024 4:16:00 PM

Congratulations, Daniel!

Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/20/2024 9:38:00 PM

Hello Kim , thank you for offering congratulations, that's very kind of you , and for for taking the time to message, Danny

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/16/2024 9:54:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "My Irish Rose" write. I love pretty roses... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............

Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/16/2024 11:48:00 AM

My dearest Paula , you are probably one of the kindest souls on poetry soup, I'm so pleased you liked the poem and I hope your still on that magical high from your POTD award . Daniel

Jay Narain

Date: 5/16/2024 9:34:00 AM

Thanks for listing your nice poem in my sponsored contest. Congratulations.

Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/16/2024 9:53:00 AM

Good Evening Jay , it was an absolute pleasure to enter your contest and many thanks for the placement , also for sending such a kind and thoughtful message. Daniel

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/15/2024 1:46:00 PM

The Irish do have a great command of language, as you show in your poems. My Irish Rose is perfection in beauty and style. I absolutely love it. I've saved it as a favorite.

Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/15/2024 2:39:00 PM

Hello again Hilda , I'm truly honoured you have saved this poem as a favourite , I also recognise the time you spend reading and messaging regards my poetry , and for that I am truly grateful , I have so little time these days to remark on others poetry but God willing I hope to have free time to read and explore deserving poets who sadly go unnoticed . From the bottom of my heart thank you . Danny

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/13/2024 3:56:00 PM

I'm in awe of your rhyme scheme, your poems fluidity and cadence , as well as your imagery. I especially liked this line: Or fulfil my heart where love had sadly failed. Like crusading knights who sought the grail. But those lost two lines were captivating and enchanting. Best wishes with the contest...hope you're well. Have wonderful evening, Sara

Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/15/2024 2:55:00 AM

Good Morning Sara, apologies I have had a hectic few days travelling and not yet fully recovered but a lot stronger than I was. As always thank your kindness in your words , I tried to marry the love of a person with a flower not sure it worked but I'm learning slowly . As always thanks for your lovely comments . Danny

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/13/2024 8:38:00 AM

Dear Daniel, A beautiful and poignant poem. The opening line sets a melancholic tone, but the rose symbolizes hope. I love how the line "Like crusading knights who sought the grail" adds a layer of depth, comparing the search for love to a noble quest. Also the line "Dispersed to rest in Nature's treasured womb" eloquently speaks to the cycle of life and the enduring power of beauty. The ending leaves a lasting impression of the rose's captivating presence. - Blessings, Daniel

Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/15/2024 2:52:00 AM

Good Morning Daniel , I'm so pleased you found them poem to be beautiful and poignant, your kind words are as always truly appreciated . Thank you for your valued time . Daniel