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2/6/2021 12:32:24 PM
mike porter
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I was standing tall, really thought I knew the score.
but when I saw you through the monocular
You gave me, sitting in his car holding.
you in his arms while smoking his Cuban cigar from afar,
I was impressed with how well this monocular works so far.
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2/7/2021 8:40:58 AM
Blameless Vestal
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This is nice, very vivid imagery.
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