Poetry Forum
For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
1/8/2021 12:31:48 AM
mike porter Posts: 10
|
The heavens open up and the lord's spirit. came down from heaven riding on clouds of lightning bolts That filled the church. with tails of shooting stars and streaks of comets He then commanded the rings of Saturn. to anoint the icons with brightly shining halos He then commanded the flames from the sun. to light the holy candles And he commanded the rocks from the holy land. to pile up one upon the other and placed the altar upon it and blessed everyone from that place. edited by jargenlink on 1/8/2021
|
• permalink
• reply with quote
|
Powered by AspNetForum
6.6.0.0
© 2006-2010 Jitbit Software