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4/30/2024 12:57:07 AM
Elaine DVC Posts: 4
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The Palm in One’s Heart It's a heartwarming and loving memory.
There’s a glow in one’s face, As one looks at these roads Traces this memorable place And reminisce about the unforgettable day.
Remembering then the flowers swayed in the air, With varieties of colors; blooming everywhere Pine trees so high, numerous as ever, It made this place so cool and tender.
Walking along this sloping hillside One's heart beat fast, as they stood side by side Within smiles, happiness and peace linger They gazed at each other, seemingly speechless.
Sitting on this lovely bench, With drops of rain drench Telling stories that amazed oneself Enjoying one another seems endless.
At last, you turned to one and gazed deeply Lifted one’s hand, and caressed it gently, Put thy hand in your heart And close your eyes slowly.
Poem Style: Free Verse
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