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Look Closely

Look closely,  feel the harmless heat 
enveloping black-diamond 
         petals in the glistening
            garden of glossy geraniums.
There, sprouts rosemary dreams
           from an untouched silhouette,
           eager to be seen beyond 
      her perfumed pigments. 

Her universe was sprinkled 
with starry streams 
of gleaming rays, 
as she swayed to symphonic 
serenades filled with hazel dust.
They may gawk with greedy 
glares as wide as the night sky,
marking her with lecherous 
objects that only please 
shameless eyes.

She was never 
in need of a sixth sense
to understand iron glances
that travel in nefarious packs,
with sugar-burnt hunger 
washing all over her
unblistered flesh,
judging her concealer 
as a manipulative facade,
seeking uncalled-for affirmations
that she never solicited,
misconceiving her thin lines 
of red-river lipstick.

Her summer physique allowed 
no consent for invasive intrusion,
yet carnal cravings become 
unwelcome toxic trespassers.

Their immoral thoughts 
believe shallow words 
give them wanderlust wings,
while sinister stars in their sky
label her a soulless mannequin,
objectifying her 
cinnamon-glazed skin,
sun-kissed hair, 
and pecan-powdered~
caramelized voluptuous flare,
with their vehement 
voracious desires.
Swinging penetrative thin blades 
of opinions from miles,
oblivious to the fact that 
she is the sanguine strength 
that strolls in silver silence 
across spiky swards,
suppressing the pain her 
bones have endured with 
every whiskering 
whistle they wolfed.
There, if the mauve moon and 
crystalline constellations look closely,
they would find versatile 
mirrors of meaning 
reflecting the times 
she parades a smile too
comfortable to wear,
for they have concluded 
her bed to be a shrine 
of blenders and
overflowing thickened blades,
cursed by the biological
sins of Adam's ancestors. 

Copyright © Ink Empress | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 5/21/2024 4:10:00 PM

That third stanza and on really convey the stupid mentality of many guys who really need to get a clue instead of writing women off as too mysterious or complex to understand. The swinging knives. Haha was I right to think they are a metaphor for an appendage of the male? Good one, Ink.
Date: 5/21/2024 2:58:00 PM

Poem makes a good point. I liked the summation in the last line, "cursed by the biological sins of Adam's ancestors". Good luck with the contest.
Date: 5/21/2024 12:38:00 PM

Dear Ink, I wanted to commend you on the brilliance of this poem, which showcases exceptional poetic skill through clever metaphors and vivid imagery. You have expertly portrayed a character who fiercely defends the honor of a loved one, while also highlighting the superficial judgments they face. The character's resilience and inner strength are beautifully captured in your writing, culminating in a powerful and memorable conclusion. This is my favorite. With best wishes for the contest
Date: 5/21/2024 11:20:00 AM

You amply demonstrate with flair and fury how inner resilience and integrity, when forged with a will, serve to overcome cruel and dismissive objectification. I understand that women are judged by surface superficialities much more than men, taking a toll on both physical and emotional health. A bravura accomplishment! All my best, Robert
Date: 5/21/2024 8:35:00 AM

I look closely aee… harmless heat enveloping black-diamond petals… ayayooooo very hot aeee these days .. universe was sprinkled with starry streams of gleaming rays, mmmm the kind of gorgeousness this piece brings.. misconceiving her thin lines of red-river lipstick… carnal cravings become unwelcome toxic trespassers. damn papi.. cinnamon-glazed skin, sun-kissed hair, and pecan-powdered caramelized voluptuous flare,.mauve moon and crystalline constellation… absolutely breathtaking weave papi
Date: 5/21/2024 8:28:00 AM

This is an excellent theme for the contest and very clever to use the option your did.. Poor, Adam, gets blamed for everything, doesn't he, but then again so does Eve... I like how this is a vivid and evocative exploration of a woman's experience of objectification and the silent strength she harbours within. It uses rich, sensual imagery to draw us into a garden of "glossy geraniums" and "black-diamond petals," setting a scene that is both beautiful and fraught with deeper significance.
Date: 5/21/2024 8:23:00 AM

Dearest Empress, What a very powerful exploration of objectification often overlooked in women. I love how your creative words, from "black-diamond petals" to "pecan-powdered caramelized voluptuous flare," beautifully convey the richness of female existence beyond mere appearances. Having three daughters and now 3 granddaughters I love how you highlight the pain and resilience women must endure. Empress, this piece is a stunning testament to your talent showing the amazing inherent worth and strength in every single woman worldwide. I will not only FAV but share with my family. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/21/2024 8:15:00 AM

"She was never in need of a sixth sense to understand iron glances that travel in nefarious packs," -- Great visual! "suppressing the pain her bones have endured with every whiskering whistle they wolfed." -- outward appearance can be very deceiving. What goes on inside another can be a deeply guarded secret, a pain ill defined even by self. Know that what we see in the outside world, in others, is more indicative of what is inside ourselves and not elsewhere begotten. Excellent read. Thank you.
Date: 5/21/2024 5:53:00 AM

I liked these lines too, 'she is the sanguine strength that strolls in silver silence'. This is what any woman would want to be - someone with the optimistic confidence of wisdom. J :)
Date: 5/21/2024 5:23:00 AM

I enjoyed your descriptive, powerful lines as well as your alliterations. You remain the queen of alliteration for sure. I appreciate how you addressed the objectification of women. Especially liked these lines: Swinging penetrative thin blades of opinions from miles, oblivious to the fact that she is the sanguine strength that strolls in silver silence Wishing you a pleasant day, hugs, Sara
Date: 5/21/2024 5:20:00 AM

Another masterful write my friend. Fiercely protective of her, defending her honor from shallow thoughts.---while sinister stars in their sky label her a soulless mannequin, objectifying her cinnamon-glazed skin, sun-kissed hair---she is the sanguine strength that strolls in silver silence ---suppressing the pain her bones have endured---Perfect ending line. A FAVE!
Date: 5/21/2024 4:18:00 AM

So many alliterations in this poem too … well said

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