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An artist paints nomadic drifting clouds, That move with grace in chiffon shrouds, Of summers scorched an earthly brown, Man prays God's teardrops tumble down. A preacher prays a nodding skywards glance, Summer rains offer his sermon, another chance, To remove the grey clouds that man has made, To feel like a child loved, when he first played. A child of love paints through tinted eyes, Of matchstick faces and the bluest skies, To laugh in God's playground all summer long, Whether sunshine or rain, life can do no wrong. The scent of summer rain no artist can paint, It lives in our senses and is forever engrained, Our lives like winter showers will untimely fall, But to live our best lives we must always stand tall.

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Date: 5/30/2024 6:02:00 PM
Dear Daniel, the scent of summer rain is wonderful, reminiscent, inspiring and optimistic. Your lovely poem captures the qualities of summer rain with beautiful imagery and poetic finesse. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/30/2024 9:20:00 PM
Good Morning Susan , that's so kind of you to message such kind words, it's truly much appreciated . Thank you , Daniel.
Date: 5/21/2024 4:11:00 PM
A lovely, captivating poem, dear Daniel. Your lines and images beautifully captured the essence of summer (chiffon shrouds, matchstick faces) I am aware of the subtle depth in these lines: The scent of summer rain no artist can paint, It lives in our senses and is forever engrained, Summer rain is the best. Remembering it triggers countless memories. Exquisite poem, Daniel! wishing you a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/21/2024 10:21:00 PM
Good Morning Sara, and thank you for your kind words as always , I'm not particularly happy with the poem, but then I rarely am , but sometimes the pen wants to write and other days it just plain simply refuses . Have a wonderful week , your Irish friend Danny
Date: 5/21/2024 12:18:00 PM
What a delightful, yet deeply pensive, poem, Daniel - ultimately a poem of faith "raining" down from clouds of hope. So many striking images. If this is for a contest, best wishes and blessings of summer rain to you!
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/21/2024 10:17:00 PM
Hi Sam , it's very good of you to message and yes you are correct in respects to faith and hope , many thanks for your time it's truly much appreciated . Danny
Date: 5/21/2024 9:12:00 AM
Nicely penned, Daniel! Enjoyed reading it!
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 5/21/2024 10:13:00 PM
Good Morning Smita , and thank you for your kind words , they are much appreciated . Danny

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